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You gotta get up and try and try and try by PaigeMichaelisJ You gotta get up and try and try and try by PaigeMichaelisJ
I can't think of names for my artwork aahhahahahah.... This is summing up basically how I feel right now......plz critique it xx

The title came from p!nks new song 😄😄
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:iconilovewatermelon:
I think this is really good! I love this artwork! I've never written a critique before so I don't know if I'm even doing this right.... :(

But I see that you need a title for this...
so I suggest:
-Tearing Memories
-Flowing Hearts

well I don't really know if I helped you or not but I hope I was helpful in some way. ^^
I don't know P!nk so I'm sorry... this may not be in any use but at least I tried right???
Teehee^^
Well Good look with your title! I hope you come up with a great title or... maybe even use mine.. ( just maybe)

Well good LUcK!!! ^^

~FLyTiLLUDiE~
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:iconbanzaigirl260:
Don't takeany of this personally okay?Even if it's not perfect that means there's room for nimprovement.

Your vision I gave 3 stars.Why?It does say alot and on first look it gives impression of anything with negative feelings it could range from sadness to misery to depression.If you were going for a look of defeat then this would be 4 stars but for now it's 3 not too bad and not great but if you ever decide to try again you will see improvement.

Originality.Now I gave a low score on this because as far as it goes there have been plenty of things similar to this therefore making it not the most original idea.If you want to still have the basic concept of sadness keep it but show it in more creative way or in your own style.

Technique this is what bugs me but you are still improving and I'm not great either.To explain the most detailed thing in the drawing is the eye but the rest looks less detail then one would expect,there isnt any shading nor is there shadows on your body and clothes.If you want to improve to this try taking pictures of yourself facing or with your back behind light(artificial or natural is fine as long as there is light)and look where the light hits and where the shadows are.

Impact 3.5 stars reason?Very straight forward emotion we can see it very clearly so the impact isnt much.What i'm sayign is when a picture is hiding emotion it makes a greater impact when that emotion is discover because we never saw it in the first place.The emotion here is shown very straight forward ,it makes impact but not alot.

I tried and I hope my critique helps you to improve don't take this too personally as i said in the begin because critiques are here to help someone see what they can do to improve.I'm not a professional artist neither so I can understand if this critique can strike a few nerves in you.This is a nicely drawn picture and iI hope you aren't feeling so sad anymore.
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:iconilovewatermelon:
Thank you for accepting my very first critique!!! ^^

~FLyTiLLUDiE~
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PaigeMichaelisJ Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's ok
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Ssu-Chan Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwww
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PaigeMichaelisJ Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thx this took forever cx
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Ssu-Chan Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome!! :D :D
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PaigeMichaelisJ Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
😄😄😄
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